Wednesday, April 8, 2015

Connecting your Sources: Creating a Conversation

Source A:
Are Fashion Models a Group at Risk for Eating Disorders and Substance Abuse?
by: Paolo Santonastaso, Silvia Mondini, Angela Favaro


  • This evidence that this article supports other my sources because it helps me explain the outcome of the eating disorders that a big majority of the models in the fashion industry have. This source provides hard facts that include things like an actual case study, symptoms, and ways of treatment.
  • This source does not refute any of my other sources. It only keeps the ball rolling in explaining why the fashion industry has a terrible effect on models all over the world. Although, recently my wonderful College Writing teacher provided an awesome article that told me about a new law that was set in the fashion industry that could actually cause a decline in the eating disorders, which could mean a decline in this area of problems around the world.
  • The article can help the reader fully understand what an eating disorder looks like. It can also draw a picture for how much of an affect eating disorders have on the fashion industry and even beyond just the runway. 
  • I would introduce this article as more of a science professor. The article provides more hard facts and is pretty emotionless in describing what the disorder looks like. The case study also describes a more serious, and to the point person that is here to state the facts and be on there way. 

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